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and flaming like my Heart.

Eeeee, this took two hours. But I don't like the result (*ahemahem*crappyshading*ahemahem*). u__u Crit please?





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:iconzabethia:
i-it's beautiful ;A;
:iconmolii08:
Y-you think so? ;A;

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:iconmolii08:
T-thank you. ;0;

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:icontododeygulash:
La unica critica se me ocurre es esta:
Hay damasiado contraste entre la gran cantidad de detalle en el pelo y la simpleza de la piel. Talvez se solucionaria con mas grados en el sombreado de la piel P:
Ah, y el pelo no está proyectando ninguna sombra. Eso ya es mas facil de arreglar P:

Por lo demas, buen trabajo -w-

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:iconmolii08:
Y yo justo que queria hacerla más fácil... T_T Gracias por la crítica!

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:iconhaleo08:
Y-Yes, it is beautiful ; ^ ;
Who is this beautiful creature?

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I know it's sad that I never gave a damn about the weather and it never gave a damn about me.
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I think it's gorgeous
You did a wonderful job on shading the hair :)

I think you should see what some skin shading from the hair would look like. and if you don't think it looks right you should leave it as is

also one of the collar points is larger than the other(I'm not sure if that was intention or not)

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..... the game :giggle: You just lost it
:iconmolii08:
Thank you. ;A;
I dunno. Some random girl, I guess.

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:iconmolii08:
Thank you for your wonderful critique. :) I'll have it in mind next time!

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